congratulations on a nice piece of stylistic orchestration. I only had time to listen to the first 5 minutes of your original version, but my comments are: tempo is good - no problem for flutes etc who are use to and enjoy playing Italian symphony at speed. It does feel a bit awkward at 0.17/18; 1.14; 2.37 and 3.05-3.20 where (without viewing the score) it seems to me that the orchestration might need adjustment. And at 4.0-ish it all seemed uncharacteristically lacking in oomph. Just my personal opinions on a first hearing, but overall I thought it very well done.